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19 August 2022

• 02:4602:46, 19 August 2022 diff hist +5‎ Blizzard of Ozz ‎ Since this is Ozzy's debut solo album but not his debut album as a band member we should make that clear that in the lead sentence.

16 August 2022

• 00:2300:23, 16 August 2022 diff hist +85‎ Talk:3B series computers ‎ →‎Clarify that early versions of AT&T 3B series of computers where used in-house only
• 00:2200:22, 16 August 2022 diff hist +929‎ Talk:3B series computers ‎ →‎Clarify that early versions of AT&T 3B series of computers where used in-house only: new section Tag: New topic

14 August 2022

• 23:2223:22, 14 August 2022 diff hist +635‎ Talk:Upstart (software) ‎ →‎If Chrome OS and Chromium OS still use Upstart then is it really dead?: new section Tag: New topic

8 September 2021

• 16:5616:56, 8 September 2021 diff hist −1‎ Grendel's Den ‎ Given that the restaurant still operates as Sept., 2021 and there is no reliable source stating that Affleck no longer considers it one of his favorites, it better to say it "is" a favorite of rather then "was" a favorite.

24 June 2021

• 15:3715:37, 24 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ Talk:Postural orthostatic tachycardia syndrome ‎ →‎No mention of the the term "Grinch Syndrome" an alternate but politically incorrect bane formally used by doctors for POTS
• 15:3715:37, 24 June 2021 diff hist +853‎ Talk:Postural orthostatic tachycardia syndrome ‎ →‎No mention of the the term "Grinch Syndrome" an alternate but politically incorrect bane formally used by doctors for POTS: new section

5 September 2020

• 00:0100:01, 5 September 2020 diff hist +77‎ Video tape recorder ‎ →‎Formats and products: adding Video Cassette Recording format from Phillips

15 April 2020

• 23:3423:34, 15 April 2020 diff hist +27‎ Mint chocolate ‎ Added links Tags: canned edit summary Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

8 April 2020

• 04:0704:07, 8 April 2020 diff hist +11‎ Deep in My Heart (1954 film) ‎ →‎Reception and distribution: commercial VHS and laserdiscs are no longer made so "out if print" is outdated description. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

5 March 2020

• 15:3015:30, 5 March 2020 diff hist +44‎ AppleWorks ‎ should mention Mac version in intro Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

22 February 2020

• 10:1510:15, 22 February 2020 diff hist +12‎ American Liberty League ‎ →‎Alleged conspiracy: rewording last sentence fit with corrected prior sentence.
• 10:1210:12, 22 February 2020 diff hist +108‎ American Liberty League ‎ →‎Alleged conspiracy: actually most historians these days accept that the "Business Plot" was at least contemplated and discussed, even if it never went very far along.

19 February 2020

• 18:4618:46, 19 February 2020 diff hist −11‎ False-uniqueness effect ‎ Removing dictionary def tag as while the article could use more fleshing out, it's currently more like a stub rather the a dictionary definition since it currently has too much content to fit as a simple dictionary def IMO.

19 December 2019

• 08:5908:59, 19 December 2019 diff hist +13‎ Talk:Motor vehicle ‎ →‎Since airplanes and motorboats are generally not considered "motor vehicles" we should mention this in the article
• 08:5808:58, 19 December 2019 diff hist +1‎ Talk:Motor vehicle ‎ →‎Are airplanes and motorboats "motor vehicles"?
• 08:4608:46, 19 December 2019 diff hist +482‎ Talk:Motor vehicle ‎ →‎Are airplanes and motorboats "motor vehicles"?: new section
• 08:3408:34, 19 December 2019 diff hist +4‎ Free market ‎ formating fix
• 08:3208:32, 19 December 2019 diff hist +36‎ Free market ‎ since the term "free enterprise" redirects here we should mention that it is a synonym for "free market" in the opening sentence.

11 December 2019

• 03:4403:44, 11 December 2019 diff hist −191‎ Music Choice ‎ →‎Music Choice v. Stingray: Removing unsourced debatable opinion sentence "The Music Modernization Act ensures artists receive..." as such opinions in the WP voice have no business being in articles (They should be included only if attributable to some notable person/source.)

20 October 2019

• 16:4316:43, 20 October 2019 diff hist −2‎ Dry county ‎ →‎History: moved name of state refered to to begging of sentance for clarity. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

11 September 2019

• 20:4520:45, 11 September 2019 diff hist +20‎ Xanadu (film) ‎ the term mediocre here is too subjective so changing it to moderate. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

13 August 2019

• 06:0706:07, 13 August 2019 diff hist +627‎ Talk:Christian right ‎ →‎External links modified: Explained npov tag addituon Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:4705:47, 13 August 2019 diff hist +17‎ Christian right ‎ →‎Use of dominionism labeling: section has npov issues (see talk) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

20 July 2019

• 16:2116:21, 20 July 2019 diff hist +984‎ Talk:Shane and Friends ‎ →‎Request for updated information: Article needs info on nature of controversial remarks Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 July 2019

• 05:3105:31, 10 July 2019 diff hist +36‎ Foto Hut ‎ clarifying that the chain now defunct and rewording part about its closure to remove implications it failed from the get-go. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

3 May 2019

• 20:1520:15, 3 May 2019 diff hist +906‎ Talk:No homo ‎ →‎Criticism section issue: new section
• 20:0920:09, 3 May 2019 diff hist +162‎ No homo ‎ →‎Criticism of the phrase: restoring sentence on criticism of the term since the sentence "Others have pointed out..." clearly refers to previous sentence that was missing (see talk if you have an issue with this).

30 April 2019

• 19:3519:35, 30 April 2019 diff hist +9‎ Opus Dei ‎ →‎Controversy: Not everyone these days knows the Fracoist government was fascists, if they even know about the Franco government, so that needs to be made clear.
• 19:2519:25, 30 April 2019 diff hist +317‎ Opus Dei ‎ NPOV requires that the controversial nature of Opus Dei be at least briefly mentioned on the lead (see talk).

27 April 2019

• 17:1817:18, 27 April 2019 diff hist +5‎ Mixing Bowl ‎ Should have an "also" to conform to other similar disambiguation pages.

17 April 2019

• 15:5215:52, 17 April 2019 diff hist −20‎ Talk:Dessert wine ‎ →‎Serving section contains opinion stated as fact/uncontested "rules".
• 15:5215:52, 17 April 2019 diff hist +704‎ Talk:Dessert wine ‎ →‎Serving section contains opinion stated as fact/uncontested "rules".: new section
• 15:4415:44, 17 April 2019 diff hist +17‎ Dessert wine ‎ →‎Serving: section has major NPOV issues - to much opinion stated as fact/uncontested (see talk)

22 March 2019

• 04:5004:50, 22 March 2019 diff hist +14‎ Talk:Prejudice plus power ‎ →‎Defining the lexical definition of racism as Prejudice plus power has been criticized by linguists as violating the rules of how words are defined
• 04:4804:48, 22 March 2019 diff hist +704‎ Talk:Prejudice plus power ‎ →‎Defining the lexical definition of racism as Prejudice plus power has been criticized by linguists as violating the rules of how words are defined: new section

7 March 2019

• 19:2519:25, 7 March 2019 diff hist +1‎ Feminist separatism ‎ typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

5 March 2019

• 19:0519:05, 5 March 2019 diff hist +1,152‎ Talk:Seat belt ‎ →‎Societal attitudes towards seat belts in the days when they where mostly optional (50's, 60's, 70's): new section

14 December 2018

• 05:1905:19, 14 December 2018 diff hist +18‎ Catskill Mountains ‎ needs link to borscht belt, which was heavily associated in popular minds with “the Catskills”. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

8 December 2018

• 09:1509:15, 8 December 2018 diff hist 0‎ IPhone 3G ‎ “Important” is subjective, “prominant” is not, as features like multitasking where prominently touted but whether they are “important” on a smart phone is subjective. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

19 November 2018

• 08:3408:34, 19 November 2018 diff hist +70‎ Talk:Our House (American TV series) ‎ →‎Just for future reference
• 08:3008:30, 19 November 2018 diff hist +1,223‎ Talk:Our House (American TV series) ‎ →‎Just for future reference: new section
• 08:1408:14, 19 November 2018 diff hist −166‎ Our House (American TV series) ‎ Removing unsourced statements about the Warner Bros. not releasing an episode guide and it's possible DVD being unknown, especially given that the first statement is very negative towards WB.

10 November 2018

• 01:2701:27, 10 November 2018 diff hist +208‎ Talk:Smokey Robinson ‎ →‎External links modified: Frozen food line missing Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 October 2018

• 22:3522:35, 20 October 2018 diff hist +1,087‎ Talk:Moonshine ‎ →‎definition-moonshine: Article needs clarification Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 September 2018

• 02:3102:31, 13 September 2018 diff hist +160‎ Dashiki ‎ adding Sanford and Son appearance of a dashiki. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

10 September 2018

• 13:5813:58, 10 September 2018 diff hist +2‎ Repressive desublimation ‎ →‎Criticism: It's more NPOV to say "it has been criticized" rather then "it can be criticized" which has Wikipedia taking a position on the concept, against Wikiepdia's NPOV policy.
• 13:4913:49, 10 September 2018 diff hist +2,397‎ Talk:Sexual revolution ‎ →‎Feminism and Sexual liberation sections needs some improves for NPOV and missing content issues: new section
• 13:2913:29, 10 September 2018 diff hist +17‎ Sexual revolution ‎ →‎Feminism and sexual liberation

9 September 2018

• 19:2419:24, 9 September 2018 diff hist 0‎ Talk:Patients' rights ‎ →‎Article needs improvements to better cover the subject