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6 September 2023

• 16:4716:47, 6 September 2023 diff hist +4‎ Ayaan Hirsi Ali ‎ →‎Feminism: Syntax, tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:3816:38, 6 September 2023 diff hist 0‎ Ayaan Hirsi Ali ‎ →‎Brandeis University: Standard lowercasing of internal quotations: WP style Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:3316:33, 6 September 2023 diff hist −22‎ Niall Ferguson ‎ →‎Personal life: Avoids awkward repetition. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:3016:30, 6 September 2023 diff hist +2‎ Niall Ferguson ‎ →‎Personal life: Aususal firnat, and avoids redundancy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 September 2023

• 16:5516:55, 5 September 2023 diff hist −29‎ Languages of the United States ‎ Syntax fix. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 September 2023

• 21:1021:10, 4 September 2023 diff hist +10‎ Louis Theroux ‎ I like the term "America", but it isn't WP style for the country itself (only the adj. form "American"). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 September 2023

• 23:3823:38, 3 September 2023 diff hist +2‎ Revealing Same Sex Secret Crush ‎ →‎Response: Faulty possessives. Two different families, not one. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:3223:32, 3 September 2023 diff hist +1‎ Revealing Same Sex Secret Crush ‎ →‎Murder and litigation: Poor word choice; period with complete sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:3023:30, 3 September 2023 diff hist −16‎ Jenny Jones (presenter) ‎ →‎Personal life: Style, syntax Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:2723:27, 3 September 2023 diff hist +1‎ Jenny Jones (presenter) ‎ →‎1991–2003: The Jenny Jones Show: Style Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 September 2023

• 21:5221:52, 2 September 2023 diff hist +341‎ Talk:United States ‎ →‎Final sentence of the lede is an unverifiable assertion: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply

30 August 2023

• 16:5216:52, 30 August 2023 diff hist −8‎ Mary Musgrove ‎ Edit. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:4916:49, 30 August 2023 diff hist +7‎ Mary Musgrove ‎ →‎Later years: Syntax fix. Remove overlinking (once per article, upon first mention, is WP style). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:3916:39, 30 August 2023 diff hist +19‎ Mary Musgrove ‎ Reorder. Delete speculative observation. No one knows how she experienced it herself. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

28 August 2023

• 19:1719:17, 28 August 2023 diff hist +1‎ Joe the Plumber ‎ →‎Published reaction to Santa Barbara, California, mass shooting: Syntzx: missing comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

27 August 2023

• 15:2215:22, 27 August 2023 diff hist 0‎ Zucchini ‎ →‎Naming and etymology: Spelling fix Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 August 2023

• 19:5919:59, 26 August 2023 diff hist +16‎ Marca (newspaper) ‎ Style, WP-EN Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 August 2023

• 21:1721:17, 25 August 2023 diff hist −3‎ Jenni Hermoso ‎ →‎2023 FIFA Women's World Cup: Syntax fix; content unchanged. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:1620:16, 25 August 2023 diff hist −1‎ Jenni Hermoso ‎ Remove stray comma. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:1520:15, 25 August 2023 diff hist +9‎ Jenni Hermoso ‎ Per Spanish Wikipedia, "Jenni" is Hermoso's nickname and the one she uses professionally. Should appear in some capacity in lede. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:1316:13, 25 August 2023 diff hist +33‎ Talk:United States ‎ →‎"Cumulative poverty" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:1016:10, 25 August 2023 diff hist +343‎ Talk:United States ‎ →‎"Cumulative poverty": new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic

24 August 2023

• 15:3715:37, 24 August 2023 diff hist 0‎ Mia Farrow ‎ →‎Early life and family: Misplaced period. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:3115:31, 24 August 2023 diff hist −18‎ Mia Farrow ‎ →‎Woody Allen: Syntax fix: avoid repetition and parentheses with key names (except descriptors). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 August 2023

• 16:1616:16, 22 August 2023 diff hist −37‎ Atlanta ‎ Delete extra superlative factoid, which is off topic. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:0116:01, 22 August 2023 diff hist 0‎ André Previn ‎ →‎Personal life: Lowercase Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:4900:49, 22 August 2023 diff hist −1‎ André Previn ‎ →‎Personal life: Wikipedia style fix; delete comma here. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 August 2023

• 21:5021:50, 21 August 2023 diff hist +42‎ André Previn ‎ →‎Personal life: Mention her professional name, which she continued to use. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 August 2023

• 22:4022:40, 20 August 2023 diff hist −4‎ Brian Bloom ‎ →‎Life and career: Syntax, WP style Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 August 2023

• 15:3515:35, 19 August 2023 diff hist +2‎ Savannah metropolitan area ‎ →‎CSA Components: Align chart: totals columns Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 August 2023

• 01:1401:14, 18 August 2023 diff hist −3‎ Africanized bee ‎ →‎Foraging behavior: Wording. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:0701:07, 18 August 2023 diff hist +4‎ Asian giant hornet ‎ →‎North America: Syntax fix. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:4500:45, 18 August 2023 diff hist 0‎ Hornet ‎ →‎Stings: Use standard name throught text: Asian giant hornet Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 August 2023

• 22:4622:46, 17 August 2023 diff hist +9‎ Dory Previn ‎ WP links added, accent é added Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:4422:44, 17 August 2023 diff hist −12‎ André Previn ‎ Should match given name and WP name. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:4122:41, 17 August 2023 diff hist −3‎ Joby Baker ‎ Based in a country. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 August 2023

• 16:2716:27, 14 August 2023 diff hist +2‎ Stanislav Petrov ‎ →‎Later career: Fix redundancy Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:2615:26, 14 August 2023 diff hist +9‎ Baïne ‎ Further syntax current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:2515:25, 14 August 2023 diff hist −4‎ Baïne ‎ English syntax fix Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 August 2023

• 18:4518:45, 13 August 2023 diff hist +12‎ Lahaina, Hawaii ‎ Encyclopedic wording. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:4701:47, 13 August 2023 diff hist +6‎ Chiboust cream ‎ Missing word Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 August 2023

• 15:4215:42, 7 August 2023 diff hist 0‎ Gabriel Attal ‎ →‎Personal life: Spelling, syntax Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 August 2023

• 21:2221:22, 2 August 2023 diff hist −21‎ El Cajon, California ‎ Avoid redundant "which, which" syntax in same sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:2820:28, 2 August 2023 diff hist +49‎ Morning Consult ‎ →‎Polling and methodology: Too vague without explanation (added). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:3919:39, 2 August 2023 diff hist −2‎ Pittsburgh synagogue shooting ‎ →‎Perpetrator: "antisemitic, antisemitism", not "anti-Semitic", -ism, is style of this article. Should be consistent. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:3019:30, 2 August 2023 diff hist −4‎ Pittsburgh synagogue shooting ‎ →‎Background: No italics throughout this article. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:1819:18, 2 August 2023 diff hist +50‎ Rodney Alcala ‎ →‎Early life: US style, syntax Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 August 2023

• 22:1022:10, 1 August 2023 diff hist −2‎ The Night the Lights Went Out in Georgia ‎ →‎In popular culture: Fix grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 July 2023

• 17:2917:29, 29 July 2023 diff hist +43‎ Central Savannah River Area ‎ Update Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:2217:22, 29 July 2023 diff hist +17‎ Central Savannah River Area ‎ For clarity. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit