User contributions for 216.197.170.130

26 April 2018

• 21:2521:25, 26 April 2018 diff hist −8‎ Sabine Baring-Gould ‎ →‎Folk songs

25 April 2018

• 22:4522:45, 25 April 2018 diff hist +4‎ Dunmore Pineapple ‎ Restored a missing "The"
• 16:0316:03, 25 April 2018 diff hist +32‎ Sabrina (actress) ‎ Copyedited for syntax, clarity (some users may well ask, what are HGVs?) and UK English (Sabrina appeared in films, not "movies" or "motion pictures")

24 April 2018

• 00:0200:02, 24 April 2018 diff hist +1‎ Chernivtsi ‎ →‎Name: Changed the heading to fit the content

20 April 2018

• 05:5505:55, 20 April 2018 diff hist 0‎ Mont-Saint-Michel ‎ Replaced the vague and ambiguous term "size" with the clearer and more appropriate term "area"
• 02:1702:17, 20 April 2018 diff hist −1‎ St Michael's Mount ‎ →‎Pre-history: Removed unnecessary hyphen from heading

19 April 2018

• 01:1401:14, 19 April 2018 diff hist −820‎ George Psalmanazar ‎ Copyedited for UK English, removed irrelevant external link

18 April 2018

• 20:1220:12, 18 April 2018 diff hist −3‎ Vorgashor ‎ Rearranged some of the wording to make the clumps of administrative verbiage easier to read
• 02:2302:23, 18 April 2018 diff hist −13‎ Time Without Pity ‎ →‎Plot

15 April 2018

• 16:1816:18, 15 April 2018 diff hist +5‎ Miloš Forman ‎ →‎Loves of a Blonde

14 April 2018

• 19:2819:28, 14 April 2018 diff hist +31‎ Timothy Laurence ‎No edit summary
• 19:2719:27, 14 April 2018 diff hist +19‎ Timothy Laurence ‎ →‎Marriage
• 19:2619:26, 14 April 2018 diff hist +6‎ Timothy Laurence ‎ →‎Later career: Removed unnecessary and reading-disruptive commas
• 07:3507:35, 14 April 2018 diff hist +1‎ Helen MacInnes ‎ →‎Works
• 07:3507:35, 14 April 2018 diff hist +127‎ Helen MacInnes ‎ →‎Works
• 07:3407:34, 14 April 2018 diff hist +3‎ Helen MacInnes ‎ →‎Career

12 April 2018

• 14:0414:04, 12 April 2018 diff hist +40‎ Demonym ‎ Made the sentence about Quebec/ker/ois clearer and more precise ("i.e" was wrongly used instead of "e.g.")
• 13:4613:46, 12 April 2018 diff hist +2‎ Trapped (Icelandic TV series) ‎No edit summary

10 April 2018

• 05:3005:30, 10 April 2018 diff hist −20‎ Princess Tarakanova ‎ →‎Life

7 April 2018

• 08:2808:28, 7 April 2018 diff hist +17‎ Marguerite Duras ‎ Rewrote one sentence for clarity ("Hiroshima mon amour" was not "her" film, as she didn't direct it)
• 00:3400:34, 7 April 2018 diff hist +19‎ Hawker Hunter Tower Bridge incident ‎ →‎Aftermath: Replaced the Americanism "garnering"

6 April 2018

• 17:2717:27, 6 April 2018 diff hist +11‎ Rosina Bulwer-Lytton ‎ →‎Marriage: Corrected syntax
• 00:5500:55, 6 April 2018 diff hist +4‎ M. H. Abrams ‎ →‎Early life: Why use the pretentious and obscure term "baccalaureate" when "bachelor's degree" is well-understood and commonly used?

3 April 2018

• 14:0014:00, 3 April 2018 diff hist 0‎ In Watermelon Sugar ‎ →‎Sources
• 13:5913:59, 3 April 2018 diff hist −97‎ In Watermelon Sugar ‎ →‎Plot: Changed "hear" to "learn" (more appropriate; after all, Brautigan wrote before audiobooks)
• 01:0101:01, 3 April 2018 diff hist −560‎ Peggy McIntosh ‎ Deitalicised article titles Tag: references removed

2 April 2018

• 20:2920:29, 2 April 2018 diff hist −4‎ Epic of Gilgamesh ‎ →‎Tablet eleven: Removed "Mr" from picture caption (the convention is not to use "Mr" for the dead)

1 April 2018

• 19:2019:20, 1 April 2018 diff hist −9‎ Acre, Israel ‎No edit summary
• 15:1115:11, 1 April 2018 diff hist +1‎ Deipnosophistae ‎ →‎Name
• 13:1813:18, 1 April 2018 diff hist +13‎ John Sandys (classicist) ‎ →‎Works: Replaced "John" with "He" (none of us knew him well enough to use his first name)
• 07:2807:28, 1 April 2018 diff hist +8‎ Israel Knohl ‎ Replaced "Chair" with "Professor" (he *is* the latter, he *holds* the former)

31 March 2018

• 00:5400:54, 31 March 2018 diff hist +31‎ Telescope ‎ Rearranged syntax of one sentence for clarity and "flow"

30 March 2018

• 20:0120:01, 30 March 2018 diff hist −9‎ The Unquiet Grave ‎ →‎Recordings: Deleted "Romantic" (usually a literary term), as Vaughan Williams had no connection with Romanticism
• 19:1319:13, 30 March 2018 diff hist −22‎ Archibald Cameron of Lochiel ‎ Removed Americanisms (too many commas, no "s" after "s" + apostrophe)
• 18:5218:52, 30 March 2018 diff hist +1‎ Richard Savage (poet) ‎No edit summary

29 March 2018

• 18:3418:34, 29 March 2018 diff hist −2,420‎ User talk:216.197.170.130 ‎ ←Blanked the page Tag: Blanking
• 16:5516:55, 29 March 2018 diff hist −11‎ Life of Samuel Johnson ‎ →‎Editions: Deleted "colorfully" because (1) U.S. spelling and (2) POV
• 16:4116:41, 29 March 2018 diff hist +17‎ Samuel Johnson ‎ →‎Early career
• 16:4016:40, 29 March 2018 diff hist +21‎ Samuel Johnson ‎ →‎Early life and education: Corrected "a Master" to "the Master"

28 March 2018

• 13:5413:54, 28 March 2018 diff hist −21‎ The Stars Look Down ‎ →‎Plot summary: Removed "baccalaureate" as obscure and inappropriate

27 March 2018

• 04:5704:57, 27 March 2018 diff hist −2‎ Bruno Kirby ‎ →‎Personal life: Replaced "passing" (a religious concept, therefore POV) with "death"
• 04:4804:48, 27 March 2018 diff hist −2‎ Collins St., 5 pm ‎No edit summary

24 March 2018

• 17:5317:53, 24 March 2018 diff hist −5‎ Richard Brautigan ‎ →‎Personal life
• 15:3315:33, 24 March 2018 diff hist −1,979‎ George Ohsawa ‎ Copyedited for standard English; removed two paras about Ohsawa's disciples that do not fit in his biography Tag: references removed
• 15:1515:15, 24 March 2018 diff hist −204‎ George Ohsawa ‎No edit summary

23 March 2018

• 21:0121:01, 23 March 2018 diff hist +12‎ UK Research and Innovation ‎ Aded date it starts, replaced weird usage "the body" with the abbreviation "UKRI"
• 16:0716:07, 23 March 2018 diff hist 0‎ Viktor Orbán ‎ →‎First term of Prime Minister (1998–2002)

20 March 2018

• 21:0621:06, 20 March 2018 diff hist +2‎ Serge Klarsfeld ‎ →‎Early years

15 March 2018

• 18:2918:29, 15 March 2018 diff hist −8‎ Northamptonshire County Council ‎ Rewrote last sentence of opening for greater clarity
• 18:2718:27, 15 March 2018 diff hist +54‎ Northamptonshire County Council ‎ →‎History: Rewrote last sentence to clarify that districts and broughs are on the same level