User contributions for 46.208.152.69

15 November 2020

• 17:3017:30, 15 November 2020 diff hist −38‎ Irréversible ‎ →‎See also: no reason even vaguely apparent for this see also item Tag: section blanking
• 11:3511:35, 15 November 2020 diff hist −29‎ David Kelly (weapons expert) ‎ →‎Death: 17 July 2003: what people think is not verifiable, and "it appears" and "as far as is known" imply that Wikipedia is taking a position
• 10:4410:44, 15 November 2020 diff hist −9‎ Andrew MacKinlay ‎ →‎Parliamentary career: removed nonsense
• 10:4410:44, 15 November 2020 diff hist 0‎ Andrew MacKinlay ‎ he did not stop being British
• 10:0210:02, 15 November 2020 diff hist −86‎ Cluster B personality disorders ‎ tidied up
• 01:2601:26, 15 November 2020 diff hist −4‎ TNM staging system ‎ →‎UICC Stage and AJCC Prognostic Stage Groups Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:2501:25, 15 November 2020 diff hist −31‎ TNM staging system ‎ →‎Versions: Rm opinion Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:2401:24, 15 November 2020 diff hist −36‎ TNM staging system ‎ Do not patronise Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 November 2020

• 19:0619:06, 14 November 2020 diff hist −59‎ Cheick Tioté ‎ Fixed numerous horrendous language and style errors
• 13:5013:50, 14 November 2020 diff hist −1‎ Quetta ‎No edit summary
• 10:1210:12, 14 November 2020 diff hist −16‎ Yes, and... ‎ you can assume that readers are not stupid Tag: Reverted
• 09:5809:58, 14 November 2020 diff hist −6‎ G7 ‎ replaced badly written, badly formatted fragment with proper text in a sensible place
• 08:1808:18, 14 November 2020 diff hist −37‎ 1666 in England ‎ Fixed horrible style and failure to write in sentences

13 November 2020

• 18:1018:10, 13 November 2020 diff hist −25‎ Scopes trial ‎ WP:WTW
• 10:5710:57, 13 November 2020 diff hist +1‎ Jo Swinson ‎ →‎2019 election campaign: grammar

12 November 2020

• 08:5008:50, 12 November 2020 diff hist −34‎ Arabic coffee ‎ nonsensical placement, redundant anyway
• 08:4908:49, 12 November 2020 diff hist −696‎ Arabic coffee ‎ removed ugly "refers to" formulation, and text which referred to arabica Tag: references removed

11 November 2020

• 17:4617:46, 11 November 2020 diff hist −44‎ Ralph Gomberg ‎ Improved generally poor writing, such as weird repetitions of full name, failure to use pronouns, etc
• 17:4417:44, 11 November 2020 diff hist −8‎ Ralph Gomberg ‎ do not insult the reader's intelligence
• 14:4614:46, 11 November 2020 diff hist +1‎ James Le Mesurier ‎ →‎Death: Any fluent English speaker would know that "had only a short while earlier gone to bed" is utterly incorrect ordering. The damage wrought on Wikipedia by non-fluent speakers is incredible.
• 10:1710:17, 11 November 2020 diff hist −8‎ Fareham ‎ →‎Notable residents: formatted properly
• 10:1610:16, 11 November 2020 diff hist −340‎ Fareham ‎ →‎Sport and leisure: removed spam and extremely trivial items, merged into coherent paragraphs
• 10:1410:14, 11 November 2020 diff hist −1‎ Fareham ‎No edit summary
• 08:1908:19, 11 November 2020 diff hist −329‎ Mount Popa ‎ →‎Gallery: article has plenty of images already. retained one
• 08:1808:18, 11 November 2020 diff hist −581‎ Mount Popa ‎ →‎Development: edited borderline incomprehensible text, clearly written by non-English speakers
• 08:1308:13, 11 November 2020 diff hist −75‎ Mount Popa ‎ →‎Popular destination: improved poor writing, removed a clause which made no sense
• 08:1108:11, 11 November 2020 diff hist −997‎ Mount Popa ‎ →‎Recent News: badly formatted, does not seem like a significant aspect of the topic and certainly does not deserve a section of its own Tag: section blanking
• 08:1008:10, 11 November 2020 diff hist −814‎ Mount Popa ‎ →‎Flora and fauna: removed a lot of nonsensical writing
• 08:0608:06, 11 November 2020 diff hist +4‎ Mount Popa ‎ →‎Name
• 08:0608:06, 11 November 2020 diff hist −22‎ Mount Popa ‎ removed unnecessary words
• 08:0508:05, 11 November 2020 diff hist −17‎ Mount Popa ‎ former names of the country are not relevant here
• 07:4507:45, 11 November 2020 diff hist −599‎ José José (album) ‎ Removed a whole lot of garbage - extremely poor English and not even remotely encyclopaedic
• 07:4307:43, 11 November 2020 diff hist −42‎ Myles Munroe ‎ npov
• 00:2600:26, 11 November 2020 diff hist −374‎ Augusta National Golf Club ‎ articles should start with a neutral statement of facts, not a promotional judgement of the facts. Tag: references removed

10 November 2020

• 20:0420:04, 10 November 2020 diff hist −113‎ Hendra virus ‎ →‎Pathology: uncited, meaningless
• 20:0320:03, 10 November 2020 diff hist +10‎ Hendra virus ‎ →‎Pathology: write properly
• 19:2619:26, 10 November 2020 diff hist −9‎ James Hanlon ‎ removed totally pointless words
• 19:2519:25, 10 November 2020 diff hist −40‎ Jules and Gédéon Naudet ‎ do not start articles with isolated sentences.
• 19:1619:16, 10 November 2020 diff hist −6‎ Denis MacShane ‎ →‎Early life and career: why would someone have boldfaced this?
• 16:1216:12, 10 November 2020 diff hist −44‎ Mika Brzezinski ‎ →‎Refusal of Kellyanne Conway interviews: putting links into a quote like this is putting words into the person's mouth. Obviously violates NPOV.
• 15:3115:31, 10 November 2020 diff hist −4‎ Billy Bob Thornton ‎ →‎Health problems: previous edit summary should have been MOS:PARA. This one: MOS:ACRO
• 15:2315:23, 10 November 2020 diff hist −7‎ Billy Bob Thornton ‎ WP:PARA
• 12:0612:06, 10 November 2020 diff hist −10‎ Sally Clark ‎ rewrote unclear sentence
• 12:0112:01, 10 November 2020 diff hist +3‎ Sally Clark ‎No edit summary
• 12:0012:00, 10 November 2020 diff hist +1‎ Lucia de Berk case ‎ →‎Life sentence: grammar
• 11:5911:59, 10 November 2020 diff hist −12‎ Lucia de Berk case ‎ →‎Charges: grammar
• 11:5811:58, 10 November 2020 diff hist −1‎ Lucia de Berk case ‎No edit summary

9 November 2020

• 19:0519:05, 9 November 2020 diff hist −13‎ Keeping the Promise ‎ style
• 19:0319:03, 9 November 2020 diff hist −29‎ Tinea incognita ‎ A pronunciation guide would need to be provided in the correct format
• 19:0219:02, 9 November 2020 diff hist −109‎ Tinea incognita ‎ Fixed instances of very poor, ungrammatical, unencyclopaedic writing