User contributions for 69.91.76.238

29 February 2012

• 01:4601:46, 29 February 2012 diff hist +296‎ Talk:Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎ →‎Problems with Media Effects Section

28 February 2012

• 13:0713:07, 28 February 2012 diff hist +206‎ Preadolescence ‎ →‎Media: Adding ref for a bit of balance to this section
• 05:0605:06, 28 February 2012 diff hist −4,820‎ Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎ →‎Outside influences: Removing the "effects of the media" section after having moved much of it to the "sexuality in the media" section, with the remainder rather redundant and in need of trim. Tag: section blanking
• 05:0405:04, 28 February 2012 diff hist +2,661‎ Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎ →‎Sexuality in the media: Moving some stuff here from the latter "Effects of the Media section" which can otherwise be trimmed due to some redundancies
• 04:5704:57, 28 February 2012 diff hist −209‎ Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎ →‎Pornography: If experts said it, you need to cite 'em.
• 04:5504:55, 28 February 2012 diff hist +176‎ Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎ →‎Sexuality in the media: moved for flow...cited source is a flyer not a "study" but will retain for now.
• 04:5304:53, 28 February 2012 diff hist −154‎ Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎ →‎Sexuality in the media: cited source is review article which notes dearth of research and makes no such causal claim. Removed.
• 04:5004:50, 28 February 2012 diff hist −80‎ Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎ →‎Sexuality in the media: Trying to trim and add balance. This section needs a lot of work to be less POV
• 04:3704:37, 28 February 2012 diff hist −121‎ Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎ →‎Sexuality in the media: Although from a well known anti-media critic, from the article it's just an off-the-cuff opinion, not an "analysis" in an empirical sense. Removing to trim. Source is represented elsewhere
• 04:3004:30, 28 February 2012 diff hist +158‎ Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎ →‎Media
• 04:2604:26, 28 February 2012 diff hist −9‎ Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎ →‎Media: m
• 04:2504:25, 28 February 2012 diff hist +242‎ Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎ →‎Media: balancing opening a bit.
• 04:1904:19, 28 February 2012 diff hist +977‎ Talk:Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎No edit summary
• 04:1204:12, 28 February 2012 diff hist +60‎ Adolescent sexuality in the United States ‎ →‎Media

27 February 2012

• 13:4613:46, 27 February 2012 diff hist +313‎ Talk:Adolescent sexuality ‎ →‎removal of bias/unreferenced statements
• 13:1813:18, 27 February 2012 diff hist +600‎ Talk:Adolescent sexuality ‎ →‎removal of bias/unreferenced statements
• 13:1413:14, 27 February 2012 diff hist −81‎ Adolescent sexuality ‎ →‎Media influence: fixing muddled sentence
• 13:1313:13, 27 February 2012 diff hist −147‎ Adolescent sexuality ‎ →‎Media influence: Since the cited article doesn't make such a factual claim, I am removing unsourced statement.
• 13:1213:12, 27 February 2012 diff hist +46‎ Adolescent sexuality ‎ →‎Media influence: Correcting sentence to what the cited article ACTUALLY says, not what the editor apparently wished it said.

25 February 2012

• 01:5801:58, 25 February 2012 diff hist +329‎ Talk:Influence of mass media ‎No edit summary
• 01:5701:57, 25 February 2012 diff hist +101‎ Influence of mass media ‎ proposing merger
• 01:5601:56, 25 February 2012 diff hist +93‎ Canadian media effect ‎ proposing merger
• 01:5301:53, 25 February 2012 diff hist +328‎ N Talk:Canadian media effect ‎ ←Created page with '==Merge with Media Influence?== I'm going to nominate this page for merger with media influence (although, granted, itself a terribly written page). I really do...'
• 01:5001:50, 25 February 2012 diff hist +356‎ Talk:Influence of mass media ‎No edit summary

21 February 2012

• 03:0503:05, 21 February 2012 diff hist −20‎ Video game addiction ‎ Undid revision 477951299 by Jarble (talk) Undoing apparent vandalism

14 February 2012

• 13:3813:38, 14 February 2012 diff hist +386‎ Talk:Effects of violence in mass media ‎ →‎Intro and General Structure suggestions

9 February 2012

• 00:5700:57, 9 February 2012 diff hist −65‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Internet impact: improving some language
• 00:3200:32, 9 February 2012 diff hist −5‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Mass media effect on adolescent girl body image: just changing the "much more" to simply "more" which I think is most neutral, and reflects some doubts on the provenance of that "quote"
• 00:2300:23, 9 February 2012 diff hist −29‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Exposure to controversial media content: removing some language that is outdate "advocacy speak" rather than clearly scientific. We have to be careful of editorializing language creeping into the narrative.

8 February 2012

• 14:1414:14, 8 February 2012 diff hist +907‎ Talk:Adolescence ‎ →‎Media section
• 13:4813:48, 8 February 2012 diff hist +362‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Mass media effect on adolescent girl body image: added second ref
• 13:2213:22, 8 February 2012 diff hist +295‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Mass media effect on adolescent girl body image: added one ref...

7 February 2012

• 13:1813:18, 7 February 2012 diff hist +116‎ Talk:Adolescence ‎ →‎Media section
• 03:4003:40, 7 February 2012 diff hist +894‎ Talk:Adolescence ‎ →‎Media section
• 02:1102:11, 7 February 2012 diff hist −99‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Exposure to controversial media content: toned down editorializing language, plus the ref is from nearly 20 years ago.
• 02:0902:09, 7 February 2012 diff hist +13‎ Adolescence ‎ Undid revision 475480079 by 23.20.59.196 (talk) The effect size is consistent with a "small" effect, not large, according to scientific standards.

6 February 2012

• 04:2904:29, 6 February 2012 diff hist +448‎ Talk:Adolescence ‎ →‎Media section
• 02:1502:15, 6 February 2012 diff hist −874‎ Cartoon violence ‎ →‎Options for Parents and Restriction: just removing multiple versions of the same reference, Tag: references removed
• 02:1202:12, 6 February 2012 diff hist +25‎ Cartoon violence ‎ →‎Prevention: chenged section heading to be a little less "public health" since this is more a parenting issue than public health
• 02:1002:10, 6 February 2012 diff hist −52‎ Cartoon violence ‎ Removing merge tag, other content was merged here as this was better article, although may wish to remove "adolescents" from title, as this seems to have little to do with adolescents specifically
• 02:0802:08, 6 February 2012 diff hist −9,760‎ Violence in cartoons ‎ Ok, now I'm doing the merge (which appears to have consensus).
• 02:0502:05, 6 February 2012 diff hist +3,201‎ Cartoon violence ‎ →‎Prevention: merging in material from violents in cartoons that had value
• 02:0202:02, 6 February 2012 diff hist −909‎ Cartoon violence ‎ →‎Effects: removed poorly sourced POV, point to main article.
• 01:5501:55, 6 February 2012 diff hist +273‎ Cartoon violence ‎ →‎Prevention: fixing ref I accidently deleted
• 01:5201:52, 6 February 2012 diff hist −617‎ Cartoon violence ‎ →‎Prevention: Removed unsourced POV. Also this would be a good section to discuss ratings systems, V-chip and such I think.
• 01:5101:51, 6 February 2012 diff hist −102‎ Cartoon violence ‎ →‎Debates: I think this was meant to be a "debate" but they reverted to cite that was anti-media. Replaced with a cite from the other side for true debate.
• 01:4801:48, 6 February 2012 diff hist −153‎ Cartoon violence ‎ Removing sentence that was confusing, POV and not sourced
• 01:4701:47, 6 February 2012 diff hist −2,813‎ User talk:69.91.76.238 ‎ →‎Your recent edits: removing warning, as merger attempt was made in good faith
• 01:4501:45, 6 February 2012 diff hist +123‎ User talk:69.91.76.238 ‎ →‎Your recent edits
• 01:4301:43, 6 February 2012 diff hist −9,676‎ Violence in cartoons ‎ appears to be consensus on merger. Doing merge. Material here is either POV or redundant with other article.