User contributions for 72.129.81.5

22 December 2013

• 10:5810:58, 22 December 2013 diff hist +132‎ Talk:Rocket eBook ‎ forgot to sign ~~~~
• 10:5710:57, 22 December 2013 diff hist +45‎ N Talk:Rocket eBook ‎ Anyone can post an image of the Rocket ebook?

17 December 2013

• 12:0212:02, 17 December 2013 diff hist −24‎ Paul the Apostle ‎ Changed link to Noahide Laws which are what is described in the paragraph instead of the more ambiguous link to Judeo-Christian#Ethical_value_system which doesn't actually describe any laws whatsoever.

30 November 2013

• 14:2114:21, 30 November 2013 diff hist +52‎ For One More Day ‎ →‎Television adaptation: Winner of the 2007 [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Satellite_Awards_2007#Television Satellite Award for best television film.] Cleaned up prose.

29 July 2013

• 11:5511:55, 29 July 2013 diff hist +433‎ Storyboard ‎ →‎Photomatic: Photomatic was also the trademarked name of the booths found in public places which took photographs by coin operation.

28 May 2013

• 12:0512:05, 28 May 2013 diff hist 0‎ David Barton (author) ‎ Minor edit, if it were biographical it would have not been written by the author himself - thus it's an autobiography.

7 March 2013

• 11:4711:47, 7 March 2013 diff hist +1,820‎ Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Yulia Savicheva ‎ →‎Yulia Savicheva: Agreed, based on what you're saying, Eduemoni ... you continue to refer only to Eurovision

6 March 2013

• 09:4209:42, 6 March 2013 diff hist +946‎ Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Yulia Savicheva ‎ →‎Yulia Savicheva: Keep per WP:ATD & WP:NNC - Article just isn't citing notability sufficiantly. Needs more work to cite this person's notability.

21 January 2013

• 20:2420:24, 21 January 2013 diff hist +801‎ User talk:117.200.243.51 ‎ Let me refer you to WP:REVEXP and WP:ONLYREVERT
• 14:2314:23, 21 January 2013 diff hist +555‎ N User talk:117.200.243.51 ‎ What was your reasoning behind undoing the [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Buzz_Aldrin&action=historysubmit&diff=534162187&oldid=534150638|meticulous editing work I did] ?
• 11:5511:55, 21 January 2013 diff hist −1,292‎ Buzz Aldrin ‎ Revised several sections, minimizing links. Still overlinking situation in latter part of article. Added 'To the Moon'. Made more readable, more concise. Photos were in way of text. Needs more work.

19 January 2013

• 12:4512:45, 19 January 2013 diff hist −902‎ The Missionary Position: Mother Teresa in Theory and Practice ‎ Clean up entire article, removed weasel words, shortened to more concise sentences. Split long sentences for clarity without altering. Added section on book's title, added Nobel prize reference.

7 September 2012

• 08:5408:54, 7 September 2012 diff hist +498‎ Talk:The Missionary Position: Mother Teresa in Theory and Practice ‎ →‎Overlinked - September 2012 - See WP:OVERLINK: new section
• 08:3908:39, 7 September 2012 diff hist +2‎ The Missionary Position: Mother Teresa in Theory and Practice ‎ Typo in my previous edit (sorry!). Minor change needed to fix one tag that would have gone obscured. Thanks for your patience.
• 08:3408:34, 7 September 2012 diff hist +224‎ The Missionary Position: Mother Teresa in Theory and Practice ‎ Tagged, with assorted tags. This article has several issues - roundly ignored for quite a while going by reading the talk page. Hope these tags will help to improve it.

31 August 2012

• 09:5509:55, 31 August 2012 diff hist −1,072‎ Project V ‎ Started clean up. Colloquialized much of the language and grammar. Recategorized and added categories to the topics. Sources and references still need adding.
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• 09:3509:35, 31 August 2012 diff hist +2‎ Wikipedia:Sandbox ‎ →‎Design Stage
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• 04:2604:26, 31 August 2012 diff hist +19‎ Wikipedia:Sandbox ‎ →‎History
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30 August 2012

• 23:5323:53, 30 August 2012 diff hist +5,259‎ Wikipedia:Sandbox ‎No edit summary
• 11:1811:18, 30 August 2012 diff hist +15‎ Buzz Aldrin ‎ Set "overlinked" tag - too many links & lots of general, out of context links. Due to be cleaned up hopefully.

29 August 2012

• 00:2400:24, 29 August 2012 diff hist −9,909‎ Middle Men (film) ‎ In accordance with WP:NOTPLOT - Made more concise, eliminated unneeded detail, removed plot tag.

28 August 2012

• 23:4823:48, 28 August 2012 diff hist +419‎ Talk:Final Destination ‎ →‎Requested move: '''Support''' I support conglomeration of all the movies into one "film series" page.
• 22:3022:30, 28 August 2012 diff hist +476‎ Talk:The Final Destination ‎ →‎Fusion of fiction and reality in the final scene: WP:NOTPLOT guides us to take out most of the plot summary.
• 13:2713:27, 28 August 2012 diff hist −16‎ The Final Destination ‎ Subcategorizing. This is obviously a plot item, needs to be categorized as such. See WP:CAT
• 08:5608:56, 28 August 2012 diff hist −31‎ Dan Peek ‎ →‎America: Unsourced and ambiguous quotation, "you name it" is a colloquialism that lends little to informing and confuses the issue. Reworded for clarity, and now is more concise.

27 August 2012

• 11:0411:04, 27 August 2012 diff hist 0‎ User talk:Darrenhusted ‎ →‎You Reverted Good Faith Edit Using WP:TW - Justifying it With the Word "Butchering" On 24 August 2012: Wikilink error correction in my original citation (sorry). Very minor change.
• 10:5010:50, 27 August 2012 diff hist +942‎ User talk:Darrenhusted ‎ →‎You Reverted Good Faith Edit Using WP:TW - Justifying it With the Word "Butchering" On 24 August 2012: new section

24 August 2012

• 10:5810:58, 24 August 2012 diff hist +10‎ Pentimento: A Book of Portraits ‎ This is a work of fiction,
• 10:5110:51, 24 August 2012 diff hist −1,690‎ Goodluck Jonathan ‎ Made more concise according to WP:PEA & WP:OPED.

23 August 2012

• 10:5910:59, 23 August 2012 diff hist −4,381‎ Weekend at Bernie's ‎ Shortened in observation of plot tag, which stated this synopsis is too long & WP:NOTPLOT.
• 10:2310:23, 23 August 2012 diff hist −929‎ Saint Leibowitz ‎ Made more concise according to wp:pea.

7 August 2012

• 17:5117:51, 7 August 2012 diff hist −1‎ User talk:72.129.81.5 ‎ Organisation - reverse chronological order with most current topics at the top.
• 04:4704:47, 7 August 2012 diff hist +439‎ User talk:Isarra (HG) ‎ →‎Reply to Your Entry on My Talk Page - Thanks for entering comments on my talk page. I have responded to your entry in kind on my talk page in the interest of clarity.: new section
• 04:3904:39, 7 August 2012 diff hist +844‎ User talk:72.129.81.5 ‎ →‎August 2012: The word 'freemartin' occurs on pp. 310, 346, and 360 & Alice McLennon never refers to herself as one.

6 August 2012

• 22:1822:18, 6 August 2012 diff hist +15‎ Freemartin ‎ →‎Fictional use: Minor change, "female character" to "woman," in fact there are several female characters in the novel that are not women, but female extraterrestrials. Thus the more stringent designation of "women" is needed here.