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Child Casualties[edit]

This aricle is obscenely out-of-date. Why no mention of the children killed in Gaza and Israel thus far and continuing without any end in sight? Where's the credibility? What's the point? 217.180.216.106 (talk) 03:40, 15 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Last paragraph in "history" is based on Israeli agitprop[edit]

Every source provided rests solely on the testimony of Israeli spokespeople, and even the released pictures could as easily show victims of Israeli friendly fire as victims of Palestinians. Israeli spokespeople are not credible sources.

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 17 February 2024[edit]

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Please change The Israeli–Palestinian conflict has historically involved and affected children on both sides, in the leading paragraph to Children and Children's rights have long been a focal point of the ongoing Israeli-Palestinian conflict, Jokojis (talk) 00:40, 17 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not done for now: No explanation for this proposed change. Elli (talk | contribs) 21:34, 26 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Addressing issues with copyediting[edit]

This article is full of bad writing. Because of WP:ECP, I can't make edits, so I'm going to go through and submit a whole bunch of edit requests to try and improve it. Just want to leave a heads up that I'm not intending to spam the talk page, and that I'm very much open to feedback on my proposed changes. Jokojis (talk) 00:45, 17 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Please change In the 1929 Hebron massacre,[3] 67 Jews were killed, young children among them; Arab youths initiated the violence by hurling rocks at Jewish students as they walked by.[4] to The 1929 Hebron massacre claimed the lives of 24 yeshiva students, as well as children under 5.^[1]. New source included. The former phraseology quantifies the impact of the event overall, rather than the impact towards children. Jokojis (talk) 03:22, 17 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done

Jokojis (talk) 23:21, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

^ Laurens, Henry. La Question de Palestine: Une mission sacrée de civilisation. Fayard, 2002. ISBN 978-2213612515

provided pictures too one-sided[edit]

The pcitures on the page dont fully cover both sides. for example: right after the pciture of the childs bedroom covered in blood, the 3 next pictures are children depictad in a pro-hamas enviorment or narrative. or: "Child's shoe found after Gazan rocket fire hit a mall, injuring a child and others" but no comparable picture of Israeli Attacks with child cassualitie, especially from the past months. Kabi13 (talk) 19:12, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Neutrality compromised[edit]

it is totally one sided and talks according to Israeli propaganda. It doesn't include that how many children of Palestine and Gaza are killed by IDF. A thousand of Palestinian children are killed by Israeli forces till now. So kindly remove this article from Wikipedia to ensure the neutrality of this website 154.198.89.144 (talk) 18:13, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

[1] Laurens, Henry. La Question de Palestine: Une mission sacrée de civilisation. Fayard, 2002. ISBN 978-2213612515

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