User talk:Xavi924

This user is a student editor in Boston_University_School_of_Medicine/Systems_Pharmacology_I_2022_(Fall,_2022) .

Welcome![edit]

Hello, Xavi924, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:35, 14 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Evaluating Category: Liberal Arts Education[edit]

The first aspect of this Wiki article I am evaluating is the lack of a lead section. There is no information on what "liberal arts" might mean, nor in what context the term would be applied (i.e. college education). However, the article contains links to different Wiki categories and pages that provide more information on the subject. These include the Liberal arts colleges sub-category, the liberal arts education Wiki page, and the Bachelor of the Arts Wiki page. My overall evaluation is that this article serves as a good segway to information of a liberal arts education, but cannot stand on its own. This differs from other categories, such as the life science category, which has a good lead section and still offers working links to sub-categories and pages.Xavi924 (talk) 15:28, 17 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I have sent you a note about a page you started[edit]

Hello, Xavi924. Thank you for your work on Alzheimer's Disease in the Hispanic/Latino Population. User:Onel5969, while examining this page as a part of our page curation process, had the following comments:

While this is well written and sourced, you draw conclusions and state them in the voice of WP, which is not allowed.

To reply, leave a comment here and begin it with {{Re|Onel5969}}. Please remember to sign your reply with ~~~~. (Message delivered via the Page Curation tool, on behalf of the reviewer.)

Onel5969 ^{TT me} 10:41, 8 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Onel5969:

Hi Onel5969,

I hope you are well! I received your comment on my article and was wondering, are there specific parts of the article come off as argumentative? I want to make sure I can address the issue.

Thank you for your time and help!

Sincerely,

Xavier Cambi Xavi924 (talk) 14:34, 8 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]