Wikipedia:Peer review/Emotional detachment/archive1

Emotional detachment[edit]

I found this as a one-sentence stub, but as I expanded it, I realized there were two concepts here. I'm not so sure the first one goes by this term. I would appreciate any suggestions or ideas on how it might be improved because I think both definitions deserve a mention. --DanielCD 19:02, 2 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

My overall impression of the article is that it is too short for the subject matter. Could you expand on what is meant by "emotional systems that are in overdrive"? You could also include material on treatments, and perhaps an explanation of why this behavior evolved the way it did. I suspect that further research on this topic will disclose additional interesting material that can be edited and merged. The page could also use some references, and perhaps an image or two. Thank you. — RJH 16:08, 9 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

These two concepts can co-exist in the same article. Perhaps some further reading into the subject can clarify the best way to present them.--maclean25 19:51, 15 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]